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Watch me burn
In fire so hot
Watch me burn
In what you can't stop

My screams of pain
Fall on deaf ears
You see me strain
With falling tears

Watch me burn
In flames so bright
Watch me burn
In a starless night

Self incineration
As the fire goes higher
My incarnation
of the bird of fire

Watch me burn
Engulfed so wide
Watch me burn
In fiery suicide

Leave behind ashes
After my combustion
But this does not end
My self destruction
I have found myself in a dark place as of late... thought i would share how i feel anonymously with the world.
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kiwiootori Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student Writer
This is very well written, I relate to this... Huggle! 
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kordelskin Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you for the compliment,and I'm sorry that you can relate to this...
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kiwiootori Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student Writer
You're welcome. And yeah, it's not too fun, is it?
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kordelskin Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Nope, I hope this feeling subsides for you soon
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kiwiootori Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Student Writer
Same for you.
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Student Writer
Huggle! 
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IceAngel1234 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
#Watching this while in deep depression..
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kordelskin Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I hope I didn't put you in that state of mind. if so I apologize.
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IceAngel1234 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No, it wasn't you. ^^ I was already depressed before reading this.. it was written amazingly btw.
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kordelskin Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Well don't be depressed! Be happy, find something that makes you laugh, something different every day, I do and it helps. A lot
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IceAngel1234 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you dearly.. but its quite challenging.
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kordelskin Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I understand that, I have been there a lot. But everyday there is something worth smiling about!
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IceAngel1234 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, but there's also something to worry about as well. Being pessimistic isn't always my thing.. but to think realistically is sometimes the way to go.
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kordelskin Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Agreed. But, dwelling on it does no good.
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Afanasi-Wolf Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sometimes we all find ourselves into our dark corner of our life brother. I'm feeling like I'm going back into mine and I do not know why, it's just been going on for a few days.
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mapleheartchained Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
This is such a beautiful poem. I wish I had wrote it myself! I seriously got tears to my eyes when I read this. Beautiful.
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TheGreenDragoon Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
This is a surprisingly good piece for how simple it is. I enjoyed it greatly. I think I'll take a look through your poetry, and see what else you have! Keep up the good work.
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kordelskin Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you very much Lavitz! Or is it King Albert
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TheGreenDragoon Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
Oh my god, the fact that you knew that name... You are officially awesome. However, it was merely my favorite color, and the fact that I follow a code of honor similar to that of the french Dragoons. However, thank you for knowing who else was a green dragoon.
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kordelskin Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Lol I loved that game my friend. Unfortunately I never beat it... My greatest regret...
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Vilecannon13 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I really like it. Remember destruction will lead to repair. You can always rebuild from the ruble.
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Black-Jack-Attack Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student Photographer
this is amazing, i really like it
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